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__Thursday 19 May 2011__ Once upon a time there was three little boys Dingo, King Kong and pinko they all wanted to make it in to the rugby team. When they went to the trails for the school rugby team only two of them made the cut. The Pinko Badly wanted to make it in, he begged and begged but the couch would let him get in. So one day Pinko trained and train until he was better than his brothers after he trained and train he wet to the coach and said “can u give me one more chance to get in” “NO!!!!” said the coach. Pinko went back home and trained again until he got soooooo big and strong the coach had to let him in. So the next day Pinko went to the couch and said” can u give me one more chance i have got much faster and stronger” “Fine but you better not waste my time” said the couch. The couch made Pinko train with all of the other players and his two other brothers, the coach saw how big he was and had a good feeling that he would make the cut. Pinko never misted a tackle and scored the most try s.

The next day the little boy was STILL training and then the mail man came and brought him some mail, the mail said "CONGRATULATIONS you have been chosen to be a player in the school rugby team be at training tomorrow". The Next morning Pinko train really hard before rugby training when he went the coach was so surprised on how big he was so he made Pinko the captain. Pinko was soooooo happy because he didn’t make it in at the start and now he is the captain. It was the next week that they had there first game, they were playing Mt cantachewa. they were all exited to play cause the had a real big feeling that they were going to win because of Pinko. The next day, the FIRST game they were all really exited, Mt cantachewa was also a good team, they weren't big at all but they were fast. The kick of starts and Pinko get the ball and starts running threw them and scored BUT when Mt cantachewa get the ball they run around them cause Pinko’s team wasn't fast at all. Mt cantachewa SCORES the crowd goes wild, in the last 3 minutes it was all tied up. MT CANTACHEWA SCORES AGAIN THE CROWD GOES WIL (AGAIN), Pinko was so so sad cause they all had there hopes up on wining.

Pinko was sad but he learnt his lesson on don’t be cocky and rugby is not all about strength its also about speed. Pinko trained and trained even harder for next's years final.

__Wednesday 18th May__ Once upon a time there was three little boys Dingo, King Kong and pinko they all wanted to make it in to the rugby team. When they went to the trails for the school rugby team only two of them made the cut. The Pinko Badly wanted to make it in, he begged and begged but the couch would let him get in. So one day Pinko trained and train until he was better than his brothers after he trained and train he wet to the coach and said “can u give me one more chance to get in” “NO!!!!” said the coach. Pinko went back home and trained again until he got soooooo big and strong the coach had to let him in. So the next day Pinko went to the couch and said” can u give me one more chance i have got much faster and stronger” “Fine but you better not waste my time” said the couch. The couch made Pinko train with all of the other players and his two other brothers, the coach saw how big he was and had a good feeling that he would make the cut. Pinko never misted a tackle and scored the most try s.

The next day the little boy was STILL training and then the mail man came and brought him some mail, the mail said "CONGRATULATIONS you have been chosen to be a player in the school rugby team be at training tomorrow". The Next morning Pinko train really hard before rugby training when he went the coach was so surprised on how big he was so he made Pinko the captain. Pinko was soooooo happy because he didn’t make it in at the start and now he is the captain. It was the next week that they had there first game, they were playing Mt cantachewa. they were all exited to play cause the had a real big feeling that they were going to win because of Pinko. The next day, the FIRST game they were all really exited, Mt cantachewa was also a good team, they weren't big at all but they were fast. The kick of starts and Pinko get the ball and starts running threw them and scored BUT when Mt cantachewa get the ball they run around them cause Pinko’s team wasn't fast at all. Mt cantachewa SCORES the crowd goes wild, in the last 3 minutes it was all tied up. I enjoyed the story so far, I can't wait for the end of the story. I like how you explained the story wall.

__Thursday 12 May 2011__

Once upon a time there was three little boys Dingo, King Kong and pinko they all wanted to make it in to the rugby team. When they went to the trails for the school rugby team only two of them made the cut. The Pinko Badly wanted to make it in, he begged and begged but the couch would let him get in. So one day Pinko trained and train until he was better than his brothers after he trained and train he wet to the coach and said “can u give me one more chance to get in” “NO!!!!” said the coach. Pinko went back home and trained again until he got soooooo big and strong the coach had to let him in. So the next day Pinko went to the couch and said” can u give me one more chance i have got much faster and stronger” “Fine but you better not waste my time” said the couch. The couch made Pinko train with all of the other players and his two other brothers, the coach saw how big he was and had a good feeling that he would make the cut. Pinko never misted a tackle and scored the most trys. The next day the little boy was STILL training and then the mail man came and brought him some mail, the mail said "CONGRATULATIONS you have been chosen to be a player in the school rugby team be at training tomorrow". The Next morning Pinko train really hard before rugby training when he went the coach was so surprised on how big he was so he made Pinko the captain. Pinko was soooooo happy because he didn’t make it in at the start and now he is the captain.

__Wednesday 11 May 2011__

Once upon a time there was three little boys that wanted to make it in to the rugby team. When they went to the trails for the school rugby team only two of them made the cut. The little boy Badly wanted to make it in, he begged and begged but the couch would let him get in. So one day the little boy trained and train until he was better than his brothers after he trained and train he wet to the coach and said “can u give me one more chance to get in” “NO!!!!” said the coach. the little boy went back home and trained again until he got soooooo big and strong the coach had to let him in. So the next day the little boy went to the couch and said” can u give me one more chance i have got much faster and strouger” “Fine but you better not waste my time” said the couch. The couch made the little boy train with all of the other players and his two other brothers, the coach saw how big he was and had a good feeling that he would make the cut. The little boy never misted a tackle and scored the most trys. The next day the little boy was STILL training and then the

__Tuesday 10 May 2011__