T2+Rimu+Novel

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__Tuesday 5 July 2011__ I have made a poster to advertise Two World Collide __.__

__Tuesday 5 July 2011__ Luke, Thomas and I have made a book trailer about two worlds collide. We have introducs fighting scenes drama scenes and more in our trailer and had movies and pictures on out trailer and text. media type="file" key="Rimu Trailer.m4v" width="300" height="300" media type="file" key="Luke_Keb_trailer.m4v" width="300" height="300"
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__Thursday 30 June__ Today i have done most of our rimu trailer for our book. Luke and I hve write up a story board, on our story board we have put in our senes we have done pictures and videos and voice overs in our trailer. We will finish it by tomorrow.
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__Thursday 30 June__ I didn't correct or write much because the story is really good at the moment and it is putting a picture in my head on what is happening in the story.
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__Thursday 23 June__ Today i thought that the story is going on good and that it is exciting in the fight parts of chapter 2.
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__Tuesday 21 June__ S.C Today i have
 * Fixed up mistakes that didn't make sense to make the reader under stand.


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__Friday 17 June__ L.I. We are learning to give description and information needed to entertain an audience e.g. sufficient description of setting, character and problems. S.C Today I have
 * I have added better words to catch the audience attention
 * I have Put capital letters and foll stops


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__Friday 17 June__
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__Thursday 14 June__

I decided that the best way to get to school faster

that goes around the road works and leads to

Orange cones dotted out around the road. Men were driving cement trucks to full up the old cracks on the road. S

We were in to much of a rush to worry and kept on quickly walking.


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Braking things, steeling things honesty won’t lie he would tell the truth. Honesty is not a lier he tells the truth no matter what the consequences is. Dark brown eyes is were the honesty lies not a single bit of lies